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-I arrived quite late yesterday night, and did not have the chance to talk much with my hosts yet. It is the first time I visit them, and I am very excited. They seem to be the first permaculturist in Europe who successfully run a business out of their Forest Garden produce. I am looking forward to learn more about the way they work.
+I arrived quite late yesterday night, and did not have the chance to talk much with my hosts yet. It is the first time I visit them, and I am very excited. They seem to be the first permaculturists in Europe who successfully run a business out of their Forest Garden produce. I am looking forward to learn more about the way they work.
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-I open my eyes. I can smell of the freshly baked five-cereals bread, and hear the chat of the Forest Garden team gathering for breakfast before going to work. I slowly get up, stretch my arms, and get down the stairs to greet them, thinking about which taste of home-made jam I will be spreading on my first toast.
+I open my eyes. I can smell the freshly baked five-cereals bread, and hear the chat of the Forest Gardeners gathering for breakfast before going to work. I slowly get up, stretch my arms, and get down the stairs to greet them, thinking about which taste of Forest Jam I will be spreading on my first toast.
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