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+ | === open sauces tasks/ | ||
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+ | items marked as < | ||
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=== draft #1 -> #14 === | === draft #1 -> #14 === | ||
+ | * compressed into draft #16 | ||
=== draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | === draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | ||
- | * <strike>pp 61. Remove subhead ' | + | * <del>pp 61. Remove subhead ' |
- | * <strike>pp 55. include author name beneath title.</strike> | + | * <del>pp 55. include author name beneath title.</del> |
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+ | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
+ | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
+ | * pp76. recipe layout/ | ||
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+ | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
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+ | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | ||
+ | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
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+ | * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/ | ||
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+ | === still waiting... === | ||
+ | * check all logos | ||
+ | * check E numbers | ||
+ | * check chemical notation | ||
+ | * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | ||
+ | * check footnotes | ||
+ | * check IPA for ' | ||
+ | * check capitalisation & italic of 'Miel beton' | ||
+ | * i think i checked this, so it should simply be as indicated in the final plain text versions. | ||
+ | * map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe | ||
+ | * check chinese in ginger soup recipe | ||
+ | * well, as i mentioned by email a while ago, there is nothing in the characters that suggests they // | ||
+ | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | ||
+ | * check footnote consistency | ||
+ | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
+ | * check libarynth -> opensauces.cc urls |