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* check urls for accurcy & consistency | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | ||
* check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
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+ | === misc === | ||
+ | poking my nose where it shouldn' | ||
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+ | * i like the green chevrons, but i wonder if they work with the existing devices and designs | ||
+ | * speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? | ||
+ | * because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted | ||
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+ | * speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion! | ||
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+ | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
+ | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
+ | * pp76. recipe layout/ | ||
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+ | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
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+ | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | ||
+ | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | ||
+ | * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | ||
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+ | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | ||