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+ | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
+ | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
+ | * pp76. recipe layout/ | ||
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+ | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
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+ | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | ||
+ | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | ||
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+ | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | ||
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+ | * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/ | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
* check all logos | * check all logos | ||
- | * check E numbers | + | * check E numbers |
* check chemical notation | * check chemical notation | ||
+ | * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | ||
* check footnotes | * check footnotes | ||
* check IPA for ' | * check IPA for ' | ||
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* check urls for accurcy & consistency | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | ||
* check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
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- | === misc === | + | * check libarynth |
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- | * speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? | + | |
- | * because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted | + | |
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- | * speaking of braces, | + | |
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- | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | + | |
- | * changes | + | |
- | * pp76. recipe layout/ | + | |
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- | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | + | |
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- | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | + | |
- | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | + | |
- | * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | + | |
- | * pp 60-61. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway. | + | |
- | * pp 60-61. needs page number | + | |
- | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? | + | |