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* i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/ | * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/ | ||
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+ | === draft #31 === | ||
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+ | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | ||
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+ | * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | ||
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+ | * p 41. < | ||
+ | * pp 42-43. spacing here still seems off to me | ||
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+ | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // | ||
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+ | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
* check all logos | * check all logos | ||
- | * check E numbers | + | * check E numbers |
* check chemical notation | * check chemical notation | ||
* only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | ||
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* check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
* the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
- | * check libarynth -> opensauces.cc urls | + | * check libarynth |
+ | * quote references. eg. " | ||