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=== draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | === draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | ||
- | * <del>pp 61. Remove subhead ' | + | * <del>p 61. Remove subhead ' |
- | * <del>pp 55. include author name beneath title.</ | + | * <del>p 55. include author name beneath title.</ |
=== draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
* changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
- | * pp76. recipe layout/ | + | * < |
=== draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
- | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | + | * <del>pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples)</ |
- | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | + | * <del>pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page.</ |
* < | * < | ||
* < | * < | ||
* < | * < | ||
- | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | + | * <del>pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work"</ |
* < | * < | ||
* < | * < | ||
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=== draft #31 === | === draft #31 === | ||
- | * document-wide | + | * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// |
- | * decide upon //au bain-marie// | + | * pp 4-7 <del>throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</ |
- | * pp 4-7 Introduction | + | * p 7. <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</ |
- | * throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate | + | * <del>Rasa' -> Rasa' |
- | * p 7 | + | * <del>Pieter' |
- | * change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these) | + | * <del>& -> and -></ |
- | * Rasa' -> Rasa' | + | |
- | * Pieter' | + | |
- | * & -> and | + | |
* heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | ||
- | * p 18 | + | * p 18. <del>correct |
- | * correct | + | * p 25. <del>consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3?</ |
- | * p 25 | + | * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</ |
- | * consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | + | * p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</ |
- | * p 28 | + | * pp 42-43. <del>spacing here still seems off to me</ |
- | * 1cm -> 1 cm | + | * p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</ |
- | * p 41 | + | * p 49. <del>make formatting of " |
- | * contuined -> continued | + | * <del>in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style"</ |
- | * pp 42-43 | + | * p 56. <del>Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" |
- | * spacing here still seems off to me | + | * p 61. <del>remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life."</ |
- | * p 47 | + | * p 74. <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</ |
- | * a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en | + | |
- | * p 49 | + | |
- | * make formatting of " | + | |
- | * in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style" | + | |
- | * p 56 | + | |
- | * Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" | + | |
- | * p 61 | + | |
- | * remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life." | + | |
- | * p 74 | + | |
- | * quote attribution line has jumped into the next column! | + | |
- | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // | + | * <del>i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // |
+ | * < | ||
- | | + | === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === |
+ | some quotes still don't have full reference data attached, but in these few cases i think we can get away with it (and in any case no data was supplied by the authors). | ||
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+ | the references not corrected below can be left as they are. | ||
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+ | * p 23. < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * p 42. < | ||
+ | * p 56. < | ||
+ | * p 61. < | ||
+ | * < | ||
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+ | === draft #41 === | ||
+ | * p 10. **Q.** is it ok for an ellipsis (for quotation elision) to follow a fullstop? i.e. "human sex hormones. … From the Middle Ages" | ||
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+ | === Author' | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * p 68. | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * < | ||
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+ | * **Q:** are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | ||
+ | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok. | ||
+ | |||
+ | === Author' | ||
+ | |||
+ | * contents / recipes | ||
+ | * The table of contents mentions " | ||
+ | * as the fonts of these titles are set in orange on the individual pages, also put the referring numbers on the table of contents in orange (they are now in blue)? | ||
+ | * in general: put every url in blue, the difference between " | ||
+ | * in general: provide caption/ | ||
+ | * p.4: remove | ||
+ | * p.6: remove the link to opensauces | ||
+ | * pp.10-11: accolades: there are a lot of them! maybe only use " | ||
+ | * p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue? | ||
+ | * P.14: remove ">>" | ||
+ | * p.19: remove closing accolade as there is no extra line with additional info | ||
+ | * pp.22-23: place " | ||
+ | * pp.24-25: | ||
+ | * pp.26-27: remove closing accolades everywhere? | ||
+ | * pp.28-29: remove closing accolade? | ||
+ | * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. Remove closing accolades? | ||
+ | * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37? | ||
+ | * p.41: Maybe put title in bold " | ||
+ | * p.43: put floating " | ||
+ | * p.49: put floating " | ||
+ | * p.56: remove closing accolades? | ||
+ | * p.57: put floating " | ||
+ | * p.69: remove closing accolades? | ||
+ | * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column " | ||
+ | * p.75: remove closing accolades? | ||
+ | * pp.76-77: remove closing accolades? | ||
+ | * pp.86-87: | ||
+ | * pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to? | ||
+ | * p.93: remove closing accolades? | ||
+ | * Sneha Solanki bio update | ||
+ | |||
+ | Some thoughts [tj]: | ||
+ | * p.67: the column furthest to the right starts one line lower than the one to its left | ||
+ | * p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it” | ||
+ | * p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely | ||
+ | * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add? | ||
+ | * p.96: “First Edition Published by FoAM, Brussels, Belgium. 2009” change to 2010? | ||
+ | * Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary. | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
* check all logos | * check all logos | ||
- | * check E numbers (either wikipedia or 'de essenties' | + | * <del>check E numbers (either wikipedia or 'de essenties' |
* check chemical notation | * check chemical notation | ||
* only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | ||
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* check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
* the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
- | * check libarynth -> opensauces.cc urls | + | * check libarynth |
+ | * < | ||