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open_sauces_errata [2010-07-07 13:45] – <del>fixed</del> some things nik | open_sauces_errata [2010-07-20 12:04] – 83.101.5.51 |
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=== draft #31 === | === draft #31 === |
* document-wide | * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// -> //au bain-marie//</del> |
* decide upon //au bain-marie// or //au bain marie// | * pp 4-7 <del>throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del> |
* <del>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del> | * p 7. <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</del> |
* p 7 | |
* <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</del> | |
* <del>Rasa' -> Rasa's </del> | * <del>Rasa' -> Rasa's </del> |
* <del>Pieter' -> Pieter's </del> | * <del>Pieter' -> Pieter's </del> |
* <del>& -> and -></del> "Danica and Nika Kuzmanovic, and Vera Miler" | * <del>& -> and -></del> "Danica and Nika Kuzmanovic, and Vera Miler" |
* heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" could be rephrased either as "Note to readers […]" or "Note to the reader […]" | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" could be rephrased either as "Note to readers […]" or "Note to the reader […]" |
* p 18. correct table formatting for "Dukkah Dust" recipe ingredients | * p 18. <del>correct table formatting for "Dukkah Dust" recipe ingredients</del> |
* p 25 | * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? |
* consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | |
* p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</del> | * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</del> |
* p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</del> | * p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</del> |
* pp 42-43 | * pp 42-43. spacing here still seems off to me |
* spacing here still seems off to me | |
* p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</del> | * p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</del> |
* p 49 | * p 49. <del>make formatting of "Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls" ingredients section consistent (i.e. lowercase after ingredient quantities)</del> |
* <del>make formatting of "Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls" ingredients section consistent (i.e. lowercase after ingredient quantities)</del> | |
* <del>in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style"</del> | * <del>in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style"</del> |
* p 56 | * p 56. <del>Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" isn't sitting in the quantities tab as it should</del> |
* <del>Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" isn't sitting in the quantities tab as it should</del> | * p 61. <del>remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life."</del> |
* p 61 | * p 74. <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</del> |
* <del>remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life."</del> | |
* p 74 | |
* <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</del> | |
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* i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you //wouldn't// want bleed here, given their positioning. -- not sure if i'll keep these anyway (nik) | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you //wouldn't// want bleed here, given their positioning. (alkan) -- not sure if i'll keep these anyway (nik) |
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* also don't forget to make the text more legible in the "little fires" spread (and in some other places) as maja mentioned a while ago. | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the "little fires" spread (and in some other places) as maja mentioned a while ago. |
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| === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === |
| some quotes still don't have full reference data attached, but in these few cases i think we can get away with it (and in any case no data was supplied by the authors). |
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| the references not corrected below can be left as they are. |
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| * p 18. <del>Jean-Paul Bruneteau, _Tukka: Real Australian Food_ (New Holland Publishers, 1996)</del> |
| * p 23. <del>William Longgood, _The Queen Must Die and Other Affairs of Bees and Men_ (W.W. Norton & Co, 1988)</del> |
| * <del>Hubert Guerriat, _Etre Performant et Apiculture_ (Rucher du tilleul Editions, 1996)</del> |
| * <del>Jürgen Tautz, _Phänomen Honigbiene_ (Spektrum Akademischer Verlag, 2007)</del> |
| * p 42. <del>Harold McGee, _On Food and Cooking_ (Hodder & Stoughton, 2004)</del> |
| * p 56. [can maja supply the citation data] i've used: F. Adria, J. Soler, A. Adria, _El Bulli 2003-2004_ (Ecco, 2006) |
| * p 61. <del>H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931)</del> |
| * <del>Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/10136)</del> |
| * <del>Allen Downey, Jeffrey Elkner and Chris Meyers, _How to Think Like a Computer Scientist_ (Green Tea Press, 2002)</del> |
| * <del>Frederick P. Brooks, _The Mythical Man-Month: Essays on Software Engineering_ (Addison-Wesley, 1995)</del> |
| * <del>Henri Lefevbre, _Rhythmanalysis: Space, Time and Everyday Life_ (Translated by Stuart Elden and Gerald Moore, Continuum, 2004)</del> |
| * <del>Luce Giard, Michel de Certeau and Pierre Mayol, _The Practice of Everyday Life: Living and Cooking_ (University of Minnesota Press, 1998)</del> |
| * <del>Open Source Publishing: http://ospublish.constantvzw.org</del> |
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=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === |
* the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha's (even though there's just the one footnote) to keep it consistent with bernard's article. | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha's (even though there's just the one footnote) to keep it consistent with bernard's article. |
* check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls | * check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls |
| * quote references. eg. "—Herbert Spencer in The Big Fat Duck Cookbook (Bloomsburry, 2008)" or "—F. Adria, J. Soler, A. Adria. El Bulli Books 2003. Rte. (El Bulli S.L., 2005)" i prefer the first. |
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