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| === draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | === draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | ||
| - | * <del>pp 61. Remove subhead ' | + | * <del>p 61. Remove subhead ' |
| - | * <del>pp 55. include author name beneath title.</ | + | * <del>p 55. include author name beneath title.</ |
| === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
| * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
| - | * pp76. recipe layout/ | + | * < |
| === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
| - | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | + | * <del>pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples)</ |
| - | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | + | * <del>pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page.</ |
| * < | * < | ||
| * < | * < | ||
| * < | * < | ||
| - | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | + | * <del>pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work"</ |
| * < | * < | ||
| * < | * < | ||
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| === draft #31 === | === draft #31 === | ||
| * document-wide. < | * document-wide. < | ||
| - | * <del>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</ | + | * pp 4-7 <del>throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</ |
| * p 7. < | * p 7. < | ||
| * < | * < | ||
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| * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | ||
| * p 18. < | * p 18. < | ||
| - | * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | + | * p 25. <del>consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3?</ |
| * p 28. < | * p 28. < | ||
| * p 41. < | * p 41. < | ||
| - | * pp 42-43. spacing here still seems off to me | + | * pp 42-43. |
| * p 47. < | * p 47. < | ||
| * p 49. < | * p 49. < | ||
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| * p 74. < | * p 74. < | ||
| - | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // | + | * <del>i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // |
| - | + | * <del>also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | |
| - | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | + | |
| === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === | === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === | ||
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| the references not corrected below can be left as they are. | the references not corrected below can be left as they are. | ||
| - | * p 18. Jean-Paul Bruneteau, _Tukka: Real Australian Food_ (New Holland Publishers, 1996) | + | * p 18. <del>Jean-Paul Bruneteau, _Tukka: Real Australian Food_ (New Holland Publishers, 1996)</ |
| - | * p 23. William Longgood, _The Queen Must Die and Other Affairs of Bees and Men_ (W.W. Norton & Co, 1988) | + | * p 23. <del>William Longgood, _The Queen Must Die and Other Affairs of Bees and Men_ (W.W. Norton & Co, 1988)</ |
| - | * Hubert Guerriat, _Etre Performant et Apiculture_ (Rucher du tilleul Editions, 1996) | + | * <del>Hubert Guerriat, _Etre Performant et Apiculture_ (Rucher du tilleul Editions, 1996)</ |
| - | * p 42. Harold McGee, _On Food and Cooking_ (Hodder & Stoughton, 2004) | + | * < |
| - | * p 56. [can maja supply the citation data in the right format here, since presumably it was her who quoted this obscure and esoteric dutch text ;)] | + | * p 42. <del>Harold McGee, _On Food and Cooking_ (Hodder & Stoughton, 2004)</ |
| - | * p 61. H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931) | + | * p 56. <del>[can maja supply the citation data] i've used: Ferran Adria, et al., _El Bulli 2003-2004_ (Ecco, 2006)</ |
| - | * Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http:// | + | * p 61. <del>H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931)</ |
| - | * Allen Downey, Jeffrey Elkner and Chris Meyers, _How to Think Like a Computer Scientist_ (Green Tea Press, 2002) | + | * <del>Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http:// |
| - | * Frederick P. Brooks, _The Mythical Man-Month: Essays on Software Engineering_ (Addison-Wesley, | + | * <del>Allen Downey, Jeffrey Elkner and Chris Meyers, _How to Think Like a Computer Scientist_ (Green Tea Press, 2002)</ |
| - | * Henri Lefevbre, _Rhythmanalysis: | + | * <del>Frederick P. Brooks, _The Mythical Man-Month: Essays on Software Engineering_ (Addison-Wesley, |
| - | * Luce Giard, Michel de Certeau and Pierre Mayol, _The Practice of Everyday Life: Living and Cooking_ (University of Minnesota Press, 1998) | + | * <del>Henri Lefevbre, _Rhythmanalysis: |
| - | * Open Source Publishing: http:// | + | * <del>Luce Giard, Michel de Certeau and Pierre Mayol, _The Practice of Everyday Life: Living and Cooking_ (University of Minnesota Press, 1998)</ |
| + | * <del>Open Source Publishing: http:// | ||
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| + | === draft #41 === | ||
| + | * p 10. **Q.** is it ok for an ellipsis (for quotation elision) to follow a fullstop? i.e. "human sex hormones. … From the Middle Ages" | ||
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| + | === Author' | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * p 68. | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
| + | * < | ||
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| + | * **Q:** are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | ||
| + | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok. | ||
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| + | === Author' | ||
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| + | * contents / recipes | ||
| + | * The table of contents mentions " | ||
| + | * as the fonts of these titles are set in orange on the individual pages, also put the referring numbers on the table of contents in orange (they are now in blue)? | ||
| + | * in general: put every url in blue, the difference between "in text" and "out of text" is unclear, now it looks like somewhere the marking has been forgotten | ||
| + | * in general: provide caption/ | ||
| + | * p.4: remove ">>" | ||
| + | * p.6: remove the link to opensauces as it mentioned also on p.7 | ||
| + | * pp.10-11: accolades: there are a lot of them! maybe only use " | ||
| + | * p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue? | ||
| + | * P.14: remove ">>" | ||
| + | * pp.22-23: place " | ||
| + | * pp.24-25: | ||
| + | * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. | ||
| + | * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37? | ||
| + | * p.41: Maybe put title in bold " | ||
| + | * p.43: put floating " | ||
| + | * p.49: put floating " | ||
| + | * p.57: put floating " | ||
| + | * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column " | ||
| + | * pp.86-87: remove the entire right column " | ||
| + | * pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to? | ||
| + | * Sneha Solanki bio update | ||
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| + | Some thoughts [tj]: | ||
| + | * p.67: the column furthest to the right starts one line lower than the one to its left | ||
| + | * p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it” | ||
| + | * p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely | ||
| + | * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add | ||
| + | * Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary. | ||
| === still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
| * check all logos | * check all logos | ||
| - | * check E numbers (either wikipedia or 'de essenties' | + | * <del>check E numbers (either wikipedia or 'de essenties' |
| * check chemical notation | * check chemical notation | ||
| * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | ||
| Line 91: | Line 144: | ||
| * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
| * check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls | * check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls | ||
| - | * quote references. eg. " | + | * <del>quote references. eg. " |
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