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+ | === draft #41 === | ||
+ | * p 10. **Q.** is it ok for an ellipsis (for quotation elision) to follow a fullstop? i.e. "human sex hormones. … From the Middle Ages" | ||
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+ | === Author' | ||
+ | * p 34. replace period with comma after "The Big Fat Duck Cookbook" | ||
+ | * p 53. bulleted list is wonky | ||
+ | * p 87. references: replace hyphens with colons for consistency | ||
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+ | * are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | ||
+ | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === |