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* **Q:** are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | * **Q:** are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | ||
* by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok. | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok. | ||
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+ | === Author' | ||
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+ | * contents / recipes | ||
+ | * The table of contents mentions " | ||
+ | * as the fonts of these titles are set in orange on the individual pages, also put the referring numbers on the table of contents in orange (they are now in blue)? | ||
+ | * in general: put every url in blue, the difference between "in text" and "out of text" is unclear, now it looks like somewhere the marking has been forgotten | ||
+ | * in general: provide caption/ | ||
+ | * p.4: remove ">>" | ||
+ | * p.6: remove the link to opensauces as it mentioned also on p.7 | ||
+ | * pp.10-11: accolades: there are a lot of them! maybe only use " | ||
+ | * p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue? | ||
+ | * P.14: remove ">>" | ||
+ | * pp.22-23: place " | ||
+ | * pp.24-25: | ||
+ | * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. | ||
+ | * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37? | ||
+ | * p.41: Maybe put title in bold " | ||
+ | * p.43: put floating " | ||
+ | * p.49: put floating " | ||
+ | * p.57: put floating " | ||
+ | * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column " | ||
+ | * pp.86-87: remove the entire right column " | ||
+ | * pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to? | ||
+ | * Sneha Solanki bio update | ||
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+ | Some thoughts [tj]: | ||
+ | * p.67: the column furthest to the right starts one line lower than the one to its left | ||
+ | * p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it” | ||
+ | * p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely | ||
+ | * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add | ||
+ | * Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary. | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === |