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   * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok.   * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok.
  
-=== Author's Proof #2 ===+=== Author's Proof #02 ===
  
   * contents / recipes   * contents / recipes
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   * p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue?   * p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue?
   * P.14: remove ">>" sign, as it used differently elsewhere in the text   * P.14: remove ">>" sign, as it used differently elsewhere in the text
-  * p.19: remove closing accolade as there is no extra line with additional info 
   * pp.22-23: place "About" alinea on p. 22 in stead of  23 accompanied by ">>" ?   * pp.22-23: place "About" alinea on p. 22 in stead of  23 accompanied by ">>" ?
   * pp.24-25:  place "About" alinea on p. 24 in stead of 25 accompanied by ">>" ?   * pp.24-25:  place "About" alinea on p. 24 in stead of 25 accompanied by ">>" ?
-  * pp.26-27: remove closing accolades everywhere? +  * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. 
-  * pp.28-29: remove closing accolade? +
-  * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. Remove closing accolades?+
   * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37?   * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37?
   * p.41: Maybe put title in bold "Please try this at home?"   * p.41: Maybe put title in bold "Please try this at home?"
   * p.43: put floating "agar-agar" paragraph below recipe and close with accolade?   * p.43: put floating "agar-agar" paragraph below recipe and close with accolade?
   * p.49: put floating "Notes"  below recipe and close with accolade?   * p.49: put floating "Notes"  below recipe and close with accolade?
-  * p.56: remove closing accolades? 
   * p.57: put floating "sodium" paragraph below recipe and close with accolade, remove the rest of the closing accolades and use them for Xanthan and Gluco?    * p.57: put floating "sodium" paragraph below recipe and close with accolade, remove the rest of the closing accolades and use them for Xanthan and Gluco? 
-  *  p.69: remove closing accolades? 
   * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column "about" on p 73 to left column on p 72 and shift the rest of the columns to the right? use the ">>" as it used on p.32-33?   * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column "about" on p 73 to left column on p 72 and shift the rest of the columns to the right? use the ">>" as it used on p.32-33?
-  * p.75: remove closing accolades? +  * pp.86-87: remove the entire right column "about" on p 87 to left column on p 86 and shift the rest of the columns to the right? use the ">>" as it used on p.32-33?
-  * pp.76-77: remove closing accolades? +
-  * pp.86-87:   remove the entire right column "about" on p 87 to left column on p 86 and shift the rest of the columns to the right? use the ">>" as it used on p.32-33?+
   * pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to?   * pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to?
-  * p.93: remove closing accolades? +  * Sneha Solanki bio update 
 +  
 +Some thoughts [tj]: 
 +  * p.67: the column furthest to the right starts one line lower than the one to its left 
 +  * p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it” 
 +  * p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely 
 +  * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add 
 +  * Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary.
  
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