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* **Q:** are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | * **Q:** are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | ||
- | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok. | + | * <del>by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok.</ |
- | === Author' | + | === Author' |
* contents / recipes | * contents / recipes | ||
* The table of contents mentions " | * The table of contents mentions " | ||
* as the fonts of these titles are set in orange on the individual pages, also put the referring numbers on the table of contents in orange (they are now in blue)? | * as the fonts of these titles are set in orange on the individual pages, also put the referring numbers on the table of contents in orange (they are now in blue)? | ||
- | * in general: put every url in blue, the difference between "in text" and "out of text" is unclear, now it looks like somewhere the marking has been forgotten | + | * <del>in general: put every url in blue, the difference between "in text" and "out of text" is unclear, now it looks like somewhere the marking has been forgotten</ |
* in general: provide caption/ | * in general: provide caption/ | ||
- | * p.4: remove ">>" | + | * <del>p.4: remove ">>" |
* p.6: remove the link to opensauces as it mentioned also on p.7 | * p.6: remove the link to opensauces as it mentioned also on p.7 | ||
- | * pp.10-11: accolades: there are a lot of them! maybe only use " | + | * <del>pp.10-11: accolades: there are a lot of them! maybe only use " |
- | * p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue? | + | * <del>p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue?</ |
- | * P.14: remove ">>" | + | * P.14: remove ">>" |
- | * p.19: remove closing accolade as there is no extra line with additional info | + | * <del>pp.22-23: place " |
- | * pp.22-23: place " | + | * <del>pp.24-25: |
- | * pp.24-25: | + | * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. |
- | * pp.26-27: remove closing accolades everywhere? | + | |
- | * pp.28-29: remove closing accolade? | + | |
- | * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. | + | |
* p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37? | * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37? | ||
- | * p.41: Maybe put title in bold " | + | * <del>p.41: Maybe put title in bold " |
- | * p.43: put floating " | + | * <del>p.43: put floating " |
- | * p.49: put floating " | + | * <del>p.49: put floating " |
- | * p.56: remove closing accolades? | + | * <del>p.57: put floating " |
- | * p.57: put floating " | + | |
- | * p.69: remove closing accolades? | + | |
* pp.72-73: remove the entire right column " | * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column " | ||
- | | + | * pp.86-87: remove the entire right column " |
- | * pp.76-77: remove closing accolades? | + | * <del>pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to?</ |
- | | + | * <del>Sneha Solanki bio update</ |
- | * pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to? | + | |
- | * p.93: remove closing accolades? | + | |
- | * Sneha Solanki bio update | + | |
Some thoughts [tj]: | Some thoughts [tj]: | ||
- | * p.67: the column furthest to the right starts one line lower than the one to its left | + | * <del>p.67: the column furthest to the right starts one line lower than the one to its left</ |
- | * p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it” | + | * <del>p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it”</ |
- | * p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely | + | * <del>p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely</ |
- | * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add? | + | * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add |
- | * p.96: “First Edition Published by FoAM, Brussels, Belgium. 2009” change to 2010? | + | * <del>Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary.</ |
- | * Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary. | + | |
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === |