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   * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty.    * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. 
   * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37?   * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37?
-  * p.41: Maybe put title in bold "Please try this at home?" +  * <del>p.41: Maybe put title in bold "Please try this at home" - changed to subtitle</del> 
-  * p.43: put floating "agar-agar" paragraph below recipe and close with accolade? +  * <del>p.43: put floating "agar-agar" paragraph below recipe and close with accolade</del> 
-  * p.49: put floating "Notes"  below recipe and close with accolade? +  * <del>p.49: put floating "Notes"  below recipe and close with accolade?</del> 
-  * p.57: put floating "sodium" paragraph below recipe and close with accolade, remove the rest of the closing accolades and use them for Xanthan and Gluco? +  * <del>p.57: put floating "sodium" paragraph below recipe and close with accolade, remove the rest of the closing accolades and use them for Xanthan and Gluco?</del> 
   * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column "about" on p 73 to left column on p 72 and shift the rest of the columns to the right? use the ">>" as it used on p.32-33?   * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column "about" on p 73 to left column on p 72 and shift the rest of the columns to the right? use the ">>" as it used on p.32-33?
   * pp.86-87: remove the entire right column "about" on p 87 to left column on p 86 and shift the rest of the columns to the right? use the ">>" as it used on p.32-33?   * pp.86-87: remove the entire right column "about" on p 87 to left column on p 86 and shift the rest of the columns to the right? use the ">>" as it used on p.32-33?
-  * pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to? +  * <del>pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to?</del> - desert 
-  * Sneha Solanki bio update+  * <del>Sneha Solanki bio update</del>
    
 Some thoughts [tj]: Some thoughts [tj]:
-  * p.67: the column furthest to the right starts one line lower than the one to its left +  * <del>p.67: the column furthest to the right starts one line lower than the one to its left</del> 
-  * p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it” +  * <del>p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it”</del> 
-  * p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely+  * <del>p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely</del>
   * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add   * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add
-  * Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary.+  * <del>Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary.</del>
  
 === still waiting... === === still waiting... ===
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