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open_sauces_errata [2010-10-09 17:14] – 83.101.5.51open_sauces_errata [2014-07-03 16:04] – nik
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 ==== open sauces tasks/errata/miscellanea==== ==== open sauces tasks/errata/miscellanea====
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 +==== errata for first edition ====
 +  * page 89 "15ml tablesppons of ginger" should read [...]
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 +==== notes and pre-publication errata ====
  
 items marked as <del>deleted</del> have been done. items marked as <del>deleted</del> have been done.
  
-==== notes ==== 
  
   * hypen/dash guidelines   * hypen/dash guidelines
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 ==== Author's Proof #03 ==== ==== Author's Proof #03 ====
  
-  * sp 3 in diversity of disciplines, 2nd paragraph, 2nd line: "considered an art (e.g. virtuoso chefs)" change to "considered an art (e.g. creations of a virtuoso chef)" +  * p 4. <del>in diversity of disciplines, 2nd paragraph, 2nd line: "considered an art (e.g. virtuoso chefs)" change to "considered an art (e.g. creations of a virtuoso chef)"</del> 
-  * sp 4 last para in acknowledgements: "Danica and Nika Kuzmanovic, and Vera" change to "Danica & Nika Kuzmanovic and Vera" +  * p 7. <del>last para in acknowledgements: "Danica and Nika Kuzmanovic, and Vera" change to "Danica & Nika Kuzmanovic and Vera"</del> 
-  * sp 6 1st para last line: "beetroot vermicelli" change to "beetroot maltagliati" +  * p 10. <del>1st para last line: "beetroot vermicelli" change to "beetroot maltagliati"</del> 
-  * sp 9 in dark bread: "until double the size" change to "until doubled in size"+  * p 17. <del>in dark bread: "until double the size" change to "until doubled in size"</del>
   * sp 10 butter emulsion: add: "From The Big Fat Duck Cookbook"   * sp 10 butter emulsion: add: "From The Big Fat Duck Cookbook"
-  * sp 12 in About, close to the end: "okno and nadine" change to "FoAM and nadine" +  * p 23. <del>in About, close to the end: "okno and nadine" change to "FoAM and nadine"</del> 
-  * sp 14 in carrot salad: capitalise Fleur +  * p 26. <del>in carrot salad: capitalise Fleur</del> 
-  * sp 14 in tangy fennel salad: move "Make a vinaigrette by juicing and zesting a lemon, adding the honey, oil, salt and pepper. Add to the salad mixture and reserve in the fridge." to the beginning of the paragraph. end with the sentence "Mix all ingredients."  +  * p 27. <del>in tangy fennel salad: move "Make a vinaigrette by juicing and zesting a lemon, adding the honey, oil, salt and pepper. Add to the salad mixture and reserve in the fridge." to the beginning of the paragraph. end with the sentence "Mix all ingredients." </del> 
-  * sp 15 in crispy parsley: remove clingfilm from ingredients and add: "Adapted from The Big Fat Duck Cookbook" +  * p 29. <del>in crispy parsley: remove cling film from ingredients and add: "Adapted from The Big Fat Duck Cookbook"</del> **Q:** where is the first BFDC ref? 
-  * sp 18 in risotto: in ingredients and 3rd line in paragraph: "cacao" change to "cocoa" +  * p 34,35,37. <del>"cacao" -> "cocoa"</del> 
-  * sp 18 in risotto: italicize beurre noisette (in ingredients & 3rd line from the bottom) +  * p 35. <del>in risotto: italicize beurre noisette (in ingredients & 3rd line from the bottom)</del> 
-  * sp 18 in risotto: should Chardonnay be italicized? +  * sp 18 **Q:** in risotto: should Chardonnay be italicized? **A:** No. 
-  * sp 19 in sourcing: "cacao" change to "cocoa" +  * p 43. <del>last line of sourcing: "Foamlab" change to "FoAM"</del> 
-  * sp 22 last line of sourcing: "Foamlab" change to "FoAM" +  * p 49. <del>capitalize ingredients in stuffed gol gappa balls that don't have amounts in front of them</del> 
-  * sp 25 capitalize ingredients in stuffed gol gappa balls that don't have amounts in front of them +  * sp 25 <del>**Q:**: should gol gappa be italicized?</del> **A:** yes 
-  * sp 25 should gol gappa be italicized? +  * p 57. <del>in pea and mint spheres "pea and mint soup (see above)" change to "pea and mint soup"</del> 
-  * sp 29 in pea and mint spheres "pea and mint soup (see above)" change to "pea and mint soup" +  * p 62,63. <del>in intro & sourcing: "Trumpets of death"  and "trumpets-of-death" change to "Trumpets of the dead".</del> 
-  * sp 32 in intro & sourcing: "Trumpets of death"  and "trumpets-of-death" change to "Trumpets of the dead".  +  * p 68. <del>intro: italicize witlof and add: (Belgian endives)</del> **NOTE:** **witlof** n (no plural, no diminutive) 
-  * sp 35 intro: italicize witlof and add: (Belgian endives) +  * p 68. <del>intro: "First cultivated accidentally from a replanted chicory root" - change to - "Witlof was first cultivated accidentally from a replanted chicory root in the Schaarbeek neighbourhood of Brussels, during the war of independence in the 1830s."</del> 
-  * sp 35 intro: "First cultivated accidentally from a replanted chicory root - a coffee substitute in times of war or supply-line rupture (also used in US prisons) – witlof’s creamy leaf is grown by cutting the leaves from the growing chicory plant. Then the living stem and root are kept in a dark place: underground, or just sub-soil surface." - change to - "Witlof was first cultivated accidentally from a replanted chicory root in the Schaarbeek neighbourhood of Brussels, during the war of independence in the 18th century. Chicory is a coffee substitute in times of war or supply-line rupture (also used in US prisons) and witlof’s creamy leaf sprouted while the plants were kept covered with dirt in the basement of a Schaarbeek home, to protect them from the crushing boots of the invading Dutch army. Since then, the living stem and root of the Belgian endives are kept in a dark place: underground, or just sub-soil surface. +  * pp 69-70.  
-  * sp 35 in witlof and coffee: "Suze and triple sec and salt" change to "Suze, Triple sec and salt" +    * <del>in witlof and coffee: "Suze and triple sec and salt" change to "Suze, Triple sec and salt"</del> 
-  * sp 35 in sourcing: "Feral Trade coffee was hand-delivered" change to "Feral Trade coffee was hand-delivered by Kate Rich"  +    * <del>in sourcing: "Feral Trade coffee was hand-delivered" change to "Feral Trade coffee was hand-delivered by Kate Rich"</del> 
-  *                    " pink salt was hand delivered" change to "pink salt was hand-delivered"  +    * <del>"pink salt was hand delivered" change to "pink salt was hand-delivered"</del> 
-  *                    "Suze and triple sec" change to "Suze and Triple sec" +    * <del>"Suze and triple sec" change to "Suze and Triple sec"</del> 
-  * sp 37 in about: "Tinker.it!, a design studio based in London and Milan." change to "Tinker London, a  design studio in the UK." +  * p 73. <del>in about: "Tinker.it!, a design studio based in London and Milan." change to "Tinker London, a  design studio in the UK."</del> 
-  * sp 47 in intro: "osmathis" change to "osmanthus" +  * p 92. <del>in intro: "osmathis" change to "osmanthus"</del> 
-  * sp 47 sourcing: "Chocolates supplied by Dominique" change to "Chocolates were supplied by Dominique" +  * p 93. <del>sourcing: "Chocolates supplied by Dominique" change to "Chocolates were supplied by Dominique"</del> 
-  * sp 49 in Ingredients: "ersatz carrier pigeon" change to "ersatz carrier pigeons"  +  * colophon  
-  *                       "processed in the tissues of the editors" change to "processed in the tissues of one of the editors" +    * "ersatz carrier pigeon" change to "ersatz carrier pigeons"  
 +    * "processed in the tissues of the editors" change to "processed in the tissues of one of the editors"
  
 +==== v.20101011 - url check ====
 +  * <del>pp 40 - there is a link to symbiotica under 'about'. it's a link related to the text, not to sneha...</del>
 +  * <del>pp 43 - replace (http://www.gbsanctuary.org/) change to (http://libarynth.org/gurukula_botanical_sanctuary)</del>
 +  * <del>pp 60 - add http://www.constantvzw.org/ and http://www.geuzen.org/ and http://ospublish.constantvzw.org</del>
 +  * <del>pp 73 - remove http://www.altera.com/</del>
 +  * <del>pp 73 - replace http://tinker.it change to http://tinkerlondon.com/</del>
  
 === still waiting... === === still waiting... ===
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   * check chemical notation   * check chemical notation
     * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, no? the one i found looked alright.     * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, no? the one i found looked alright.
-  * check footnotes +  * <del>check IPA for 'stump' and/or 'stampot'</del>
-  * check IPA for 'stump' and/or 'stampot'+
   * check capitalisation & italic of 'Miel beton'   * check capitalisation & italic of 'Miel beton'
     * i think i checked this, so it should simply be as indicated in the final plain text versions.  --- //[[alkan.chipperfield@gmail.com|Alkan Chipperfield]] 2010/04/14 02:50//     * i think i checked this, so it should simply be as indicated in the final plain text versions.  --- //[[alkan.chipperfield@gmail.com|Alkan Chipperfield]] 2010/04/14 02:50//
-  * map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe +  * <del>map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe</del> use for online edition 
-  * check chinese in ginger soup recipe+  * <del>check chinese in ginger soup recipe</del>
     * well, as i mentioned by email a while ago, there is nothing in the characters that suggests they //aren't// what they're meant to be   --- //[[alkan.chipperfield@gmail.com|Alkan Chipperfield]] 2010/04/14 02:50//     * well, as i mentioned by email a while ago, there is nothing in the characters that suggests they //aren't// what they're meant to be   --- //[[alkan.chipperfield@gmail.com|Alkan Chipperfield]] 2010/04/14 02:50//
-  * check urls for accurcy & consistency+  * <del>check urls for accurcy & consistency</del> see above
   * check footnote consistency   * check footnote consistency
     * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha's (even though there's just the one footnote) to keep it consistent with bernard's article.     * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha's (even though there's just the one footnote) to keep it consistent with bernard's article.
-  * check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls+  * <del>check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls</del>
   * <del>quote references. eg. " Herbert Spencer in The Big Fat Duck Cookbook (Bloomsburry, 2008)" or " F. Adria, J. Soler, A. Adria. El Bulli Books 2003. Rte. (El Bulli S.L., 2005)" i prefer the first.</del>   * <del>quote references. eg. " Herbert Spencer in The Big Fat Duck Cookbook (Bloomsburry, 2008)" or " F. Adria, J. Soler, A. Adria. El Bulli Books 2003. Rte. (El Bulli S.L., 2005)" i prefer the first.</del>
  
  
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