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=== draft #1 -> #14 === | === draft #1 -> #14 === | ||
+ | * compressed into draft #16 | ||
=== draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | === draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | ||
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+ | === still waiting... === | ||
+ | * check all logos | ||
+ | * check E numbers | ||
+ | * check chemical notation | ||
+ | * check footnotes | ||
+ | * check IPA for ' | ||
+ | * check capitalisation & italic of 'Miel beton' | ||
+ | * i think i checked this, so it should simply be as indicated in the final plain text versions. | ||
+ | * map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe | ||
+ | * check chinese in ginger soup recipe | ||
+ | * well, as i mentioned by email a while ago, there is nothing in the characters that suggests they // | ||
+ | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | ||
+ | * check footnote consistency | ||
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+ | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
+ | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
+ | * pp76. recipe layout/ | ||
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+ | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
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+ | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | ||
+ | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | ||
+ | * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | ||
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+ | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | ||
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