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* pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | ||
* pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | ||
- | * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | + | * <del>pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email)</ |
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* pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | ||
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+ | * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/ | ||