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=== draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | === draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | ||
- | * <del>pp 61. Remove subhead ' | + | * <del>p 61. Remove subhead ' |
- | * <del>pp 55. include author name beneath title.</ | + | * <del>p 55. include author name beneath title.</ |
=== draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
* changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
- | * pp76. recipe layout/ | + | * p 76. recipe layout/ |
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=== Author' | === Author' | ||
- | * p 34. replace period with comma after "The Big Fat Duck Cookbook" | + | * < |
- | * p 53. bulleted list is wonky | + | * < |
- | * p 87. references: replace hyphens with colons for consistency | + | * < |
+ | * <del>p 34. replace period with comma after "The Big Fat Duck Cookbook" | ||
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+ | * <del>p 53. bulleted list is wonky</ | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * p 68. | ||
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+ | * <del>p 87. references: replace hyphens with colons for consistency</ | ||
- | * are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | + | |
- | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ | + | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok. |
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === |