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| === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === |
| * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions |
| * p 76. recipe layout/formatting | * <del>p 76. recipe layout/formatting</del> |
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| === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === |
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| * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | * <del>pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples)</del> |
| * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | * <del>pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page.</del> background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) |
| * <del>pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email)</del> | * <del>pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email)</del> |
| * <del>pp 60-61. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway.</del> | * <del>pp 60-61. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway.</del> |
| * <del>pp 60-61. needs page number</del> | * <del>pp 60-61. needs page number</del> |
| * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | * <del>pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work"</del> |
| * <del>p 83 change "ginger soup" heading font</del> | * <del>p 83 change "ginger soup" heading font</del> |
| * <del>p 87 footnote indicators in text **come after all other punctuation.** so ~</del> | * <del>p 87 footnote indicators in text **come after all other punctuation.** so ~</del> |
| * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" could be rephrased either as "Note to readers […]" or "Note to the reader […]" | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" could be rephrased either as "Note to readers […]" or "Note to the reader […]" |
| * p 18. <del>correct table formatting for "Dukkah Dust" recipe ingredients</del> | * p 18. <del>correct table formatting for "Dukkah Dust" recipe ingredients</del> |
| * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | * p 25. <del>consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3?</del> |
| * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</del> | * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</del> |
| * p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</del> | * p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</del> |
| * pp 42-43. spacing here still seems off to me | * pp 42-43. <del>spacing here still seems off to me</del> |
| * p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</del> | * p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</del> |
| * p 49. <del>make formatting of "Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls" ingredients section consistent (i.e. lowercase after ingredient quantities)</del> | * p 49. <del>make formatting of "Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls" ingredients section consistent (i.e. lowercase after ingredient quantities)</del> |
| * p 74. <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</del> | * p 74. <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</del> |
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| * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you //wouldn't// want bleed here, given their positioning. (alkan) -- not sure if i'll keep these anyway (nik) | * <del>i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you //wouldn't// want bleed here, given their positioning. (alkan) -- not sure if i'll keep these anyway (nik)</del> |
| | * <del>also don't forget to make the text more legible in the "little fires" spread (and in some other places) as maja mentioned a while ago.</del> |
| * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the "little fires" spread (and in some other places) as maja mentioned a while ago. | |
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| === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === | === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === |
| * <del>Jürgen Tautz, _Phänomen Honigbiene_ (Spektrum Akademischer Verlag, 2007)</del> | * <del>Jürgen Tautz, _Phänomen Honigbiene_ (Spektrum Akademischer Verlag, 2007)</del> |
| * p 42. <del>Harold McGee, _On Food and Cooking_ (Hodder & Stoughton, 2004)</del> | * p 42. <del>Harold McGee, _On Food and Cooking_ (Hodder & Stoughton, 2004)</del> |
| * p 56. [can maja supply the citation data] i've used: F. Adria, J. Soler, A. Adria, _El Bulli 2003-2004_ (Ecco, 2006) | * p 56. <del>[can maja supply the citation data] i've used: Ferran Adria, et al., _El Bulli 2003-2004_ (Ecco, 2006)</del> |
| * p 61. <del>H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931)</del> | * p 61. <del>H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931)</del> |
| * <del>Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/10136)</del> | * <del>Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/10136)</del> |
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